Saturday, May 17, 2008

a rapp

a rapp-
er from Brook
lyn. best bye
punc
tured (ear-
drum)
always
punc
tual with his
mouth.
the re-vo-lu-shun
of syllables: talib kweli.
he of truth
and i of:
penis tales to tell
kicking (condoms) into closets

emma
nay shun
from lyrically
smitten admittin
pedestrian pedisticular pedaling
a scrimp of loons
un-der dark-scaped moon
ocean moon spirit
open for occu
payshun

shuns word i croak
boy i fancy
noun-u-ler
ver-bi-skie
none change same

give people a legible sentence
legal sentence possession
of potamus, pistolas.
che.che.che.
check out his
mellow dee

so?toe she says
japa-knees
outside(r)
he says i say (hah!)
m.press here

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

:: BOWS DOWN ::

EXCELLCENT TRUE POWER TO THE MIND

-MR.P
:)

flossfaceanisa said...

"un-der dark-scaped moon
ocean moon spirit"
This line is the shiznit and I love the whole poem Talib Kweli his "name is in the middle of equality" I get down to "definition"~Mos Def&T-K
I like your quote under your blog name
nice
You're awsome

dumb_ta_downdom said...

Tough Structure, very complex structure. Abstract piece, I love the alliteration you used and the assonance like "kicking condoms into closets.Dope Name drop on Talib Kweli.
Confused if you were for or against rappers.I'm a horrible reader, sorry. I like the way your broke up th words and changed the orthodox of it all.
Dope piece creative and fresh.

Lyric said...

WOW! Holy crap! DAMN. you straight snapped Patricia. youre a beast and I love all the punctuation and how you set the words like you did. It's beautiful.