a rapp-
er from Brook
lyn. best bye
punc
tured (ear-
drum)
always
punc
tual with his
mouth.
the re-vo-lu-shun
of syllables: talib kweli.
he of truth
and i of:
penis tales to tell
kicking (condoms) into closets
emma
nay shun
from lyrically
smitten admittin
pedestrian pedisticular pedaling
a scrimp of loons
un-der dark-scaped moon
ocean moon spirit
open for occu
payshun
shuns word i croak
boy i fancy
noun-u-ler
ver-bi-skie
none change same
give people a legible sentence
legal sentence possession
of potamus, pistolas.
che.che.che.
check out his
mellow dee
so?toe she says
japa-knees
outside(r)
he says i say (hah!)
m.press here
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"un-der dark-scaped moon
ocean moon spirit"
This line is the shiznit and I love the whole poem Talib Kweli his "name is in the middle of equality" I get down to "definition"~Mos Def&T-K
I like your quote under your blog name
nice
You're awsome
Tough Structure, very complex structure. Abstract piece, I love the alliteration you used and the assonance like "kicking condoms into closets.Dope Name drop on Talib Kweli.
Confused if you were for or against rappers.I'm a horrible reader, sorry. I like the way your broke up th words and changed the orthodox of it all.
Dope piece creative and fresh.
WOW! Holy crap! DAMN. you straight snapped Patricia. youre a beast and I love all the punctuation and how you set the words like you did. It's beautiful.
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