Wednesday, May 07, 2008

untitled

I was going to write a poem;
I fell asleep along the way.
my brain's chemical manifestations
fanciful illusions that can never be.
he of fair skin,
even fair-er of eyes
those that match
oceans reflectant of skies.
clouds that rain down on my pipe dreams
only to be washed away clean
in sewer lids lifted.
a feeding frenzy
of his mind from which all
beauty resonates
crooning melodic lullabies
of his, and my, past
of our past
as a people, as individuals
waking in hopes of a cloudless future.
entangled in the lyrical lines
of his lectures

7 comments:

Gina said...

0_o wonder who this is about >_>
hehehehe
^__^

dumb_ta_downdom said...

Wow infatuation, sounds like a teacher your into. I love the simple rhyme scheme like fairer of eyes and skies;dreams and clean. Very cliche type of poem,love poem,
but i like how your made it your own I think you didnt feed any ish and your were just very blunt. structure makes it easy to read and so does the puncuation.
All in all great piece.

Miquiztli said...

i like the ideas you cam up with, reflectant of oceans, pipe dreams, they put fantasy into your poem (I think) which is really cool

dumb_ta_downdom said...

Look shut up and just take the fact that i reaaly love your poem.

Breeanna Greska said...

hahahaha "sounds like a teacher your into" bahh...girl i loooove your diction and syntax always...the maddest props

flossfaceanisa said...

Sweet jucies to my ears
~ANISA A

sOlACe said...

un maestro guey? sweeet