I was going to write a poem;
I fell asleep along the way.
my brain's chemical manifestations
fanciful illusions that can never be.
he of fair skin,
even fair-er of eyes
those that match
oceans reflectant of skies.
clouds that rain down on my pipe dreams
only to be washed away clean
in sewer lids lifted.
a feeding frenzy
of his mind from which all
beauty resonates
crooning melodic lullabies
of his, and my, past
of our past
as a people, as individuals
waking in hopes of a cloudless future.
entangled in the lyrical lines
entangled in the lyrical lines
of his lectures
7 comments:
0_o wonder who this is about >_>
hehehehe
^__^
Wow infatuation, sounds like a teacher your into. I love the simple rhyme scheme like fairer of eyes and skies;dreams and clean. Very cliche type of poem,love poem,
but i like how your made it your own I think you didnt feed any ish and your were just very blunt. structure makes it easy to read and so does the puncuation.
All in all great piece.
i like the ideas you cam up with, reflectant of oceans, pipe dreams, they put fantasy into your poem (I think) which is really cool
Look shut up and just take the fact that i reaaly love your poem.
hahahaha "sounds like a teacher your into" bahh...girl i loooove your diction and syntax always...the maddest props
Sweet jucies to my ears
~ANISA A
un maestro guey? sweeet
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